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Fodi: The Forums => Writing and Artwork => Topic started by: Gogo on April 11, 2006, 06:31:44 AM

Title: Something that needs to be critizised.
Post by: Gogo on April 11, 2006, 06:31:44 AM

Well, I made this in about 4 hours. Everything was done is Photoshop and a mouse. (No tablet for me). Anyway, I need some critizisim as to what i could do better. I already need to repaint the background and add blue to the flame. But anything else would be very helpful.

Before:
(http://ic1.deviantart.com/fs10/i/2006/097/d/4/Camp_fire_2_by_gogo872.png)

After:
(http://i2.tinypic.com/vgra76.png)

Put in some stuff.

Title: Something that needs to be critizised.
Post by: minignome on April 11, 2006, 08:39:47 AM

The link isn't working for me, after that more tips will follow!

Title: Something that needs to be critizised.
Post by: Matt on April 11, 2006, 09:07:34 AM

If you right-click on the broken image image, and then select view image, it will appear.  Sometimes images show up as borken if you don't manually view them.  The internets are stupid like that.

Also, I'd criticise, but I'm too busy being mesmerised by the fire.  And the lack of a horizon line that would make the perspective seem better.  And the giant fire ants(not shown).

Title: Something that needs to be critizised.
Post by: Gogo on April 11, 2006, 10:32:58 PM

Quote from: "Matt"

If you right-click on the broken image image, and then select view image, it will appear.  Sometimes images show up as borken if you don't manually view them.  The internets are stupid like that.

Also, I'd criticise, but I'm too busy being mesmerised by the fire.  And the lack of a horizon line that would make the perspective seem better.  And the giant fire ants(not shown).

Ok, I know for a fact that the horizon line is going to there. Along with trees. But that fire ants.... That might take some thinking about.

Title: Something that needs to be critizised.
Post by: Gogo on April 15, 2006, 08:52:44 PM

Edited, please look back at first post.