Well, I made this in about 4 hours. Everything was done is Photoshop and a mouse. (No tablet for me). Anyway, I need some critizisim as to what i could do better. I already need to repaint the background and add blue to the flame. But anything else would be very helpful.

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While trying to find a decent web comic I have stumbled across this tiny world of awsome. It's name, be thy Fodi.

The art and dialogue in your comics are so shallow they seem deep, or maybe they are just deep. The colouring is awsome and really brings life to the comic. The wit on such a frequent basis is awsome aswell.

I have read throught the entire archive twice. Just because of everything I missed reading the first time. And it was just as good, maybe even better.

Just need to say, awsome job. I will keep reading this for many times to come.