If you right-click on the broken image image, and then select view image, it will appear. Sometimes images show up as borken if you don't manually view them. The internets are stupid like that.
Also, I'd criticise, but I'm too busy being mesmerised by the fire. And the lack of a horizon line that would make the perspective seem better. And the giant fire ants(not shown).
Ok, I know for a fact that the horizon line is going to there. Along with trees. But that fire ants.... That might take some thinking about.
Well, I made this in about 4 hours. Everything was done is Photoshop and a mouse. (No tablet for me). Anyway, I need some critizisim as to what i could do better. I already need to repaint the background and add blue to the flame. But anything else would be very helpful.
While trying to find a decent web comic I have stumbled across this tiny world of awsome. It's name, be thy Fodi.
The art and dialogue in your comics are so shallow they seem deep, or maybe they are just deep. The colouring is awsome and really brings life to the comic. The wit on such a frequent basis is awsome aswell.
I have read throught the entire archive twice. Just because of everything I missed reading the first time. And it was just as good, maybe even better.
Just need to say, awsome job. I will keep reading this for many times to come.