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Gogo

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Well, I made this in about 4 hours. Everything was done is Photoshop and a mouse. (No tablet for me). Anyway, I need some critizisim as to what i could do better. I already need to repaint the background and add blue to the flame. But anything else would be very helpful.

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Put in some stuff.
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minignome
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The link isn't working for me, after that more tips will follow!
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Matt

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If you right-click on the broken image image, and then select view image, it will appear.  Sometimes images show up as borken if you don't manually view them.  The internets are stupid like that.

Also, I'd criticise, but I'm too busy being mesmerised by the fire.  And the lack of a horizon line that would make the perspective seem better.  And the giant fire ants(not shown).
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Gogo

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Quote from: "Matt"
If you right-click on the broken image image, and then select view image, it will appear.  Sometimes images show up as borken if you don't manually view them.  The internets are stupid like that.

Also, I'd criticise, but I'm too busy being mesmerised by the fire.  And the lack of a horizon line that would make the perspective seem better.  And the giant fire ants(not shown).


Ok, I know for a fact that the horizon line is going to there. Along with trees. But that fire ants.... That might take some thinking about.
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Gogo

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Edited, please look back at first post.
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